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[Random Kingdom]

Pretty funny

Pretty well done and pretty funny.

Not much to say about it, really. I liked the Arnold Schwarzenegger part.

The graphics are somewhat tweentasic, but it's not too noticeable.

4/5

KobraEditing responds:

thanks for the review

[I Found A Dollar!]

Nice.

Very original, I must say, and I giggled.

You could have made the walking sequences better, but it's pretty good, nonetheless.

NibzAU responds:

hehe thanks but no im not an animator i just wanted to tell people i found a dollar :)

[The Dark Hour]

Pretty good.

I'm guessing there's going to be a series to follow this. I'm looking forward to it.

A couple problems, though. The first is that The dimensions of your flash didn't match the submission dimensions. This left an annoying white line on the bottom and left hand side. The second is that the music didn't stop with the flash. If you were to replay it, the music would double over and be chaotic.

Other then that it was good. I like the way at the end that the numbers of the clock started shaking. That was cool.

nooblet11 responds:

Fixing that music with the correct codes at a later date.

[STS - Breathless]

Eh.

A little to literal. It didn't really flow well. It seems like a comical flash put to a serious song.

SoundTheStereo responds:

perhaps by creating such literal images it allows you to think what else there could be hidden within the song...

hmmm...

-STS

[Zidane, the Lousy writter]

Ohlol, what?

That was definitely unexpected.

First off, I'm not quite sure what the hell that was. It was completely random.

Second, I'm not quite sure what was up with the voiceover. I'm about 90% sure that was just gibberish and not another language. If it was gibberish, well, a regular voice over would have done the job. If it was another language, than first off, it was very slurred so even if I did know the language, I probable wouldn't be able to understand it and second, English please. Or at least say it's in another language.

Thirdly, it just spontaneously ended without any notification to the viewer that there isn't anything after the long pause of white.

Lastly, the animation of the guy at the beginning of the flash was okay, however, the rest of it was just fast, hard to follow, and poorly tweened (if at all). If you're going to do something like that, at least give the viewer an idea of what is going on.

Arcaniel responds:

You are right, I should kill myself
The basis of this video it's meant to be random.

[Heroes - Lost valley :: 2]

Eh, could be better.

Not bad, but not great. A few things set me off:

First, you could have used some voice acting in the first scene. The speech bubbles were a tad amateurish and took away from the seriousness of the flash.

Secondly, it ended abruptly. He gave that speech and then it just ended. It made it seem more like a public service announcement than a serious flash. I think another scene would have been good to put in there, rapping everything up.

The backgrounds were pretty good, but the animation of the characters' walking sequences and the moving of the arm in the second seen could be improved on. Make the walking a little more subtle as to not make it appear that the character is marching through some sort of knee high mud. Less is more.

And, when the man was moving his arm during the speech, it looked like the arm was three separate pieces and had two elbows. Make the shoulder joint a little higher and make sure that when you're tweening the arm, that everything stays together and doesn't create gaps or breaks.

Overall it was an okay flash. With some improvement, it could be pretty good. Keep working on it.

Blaze responds:

Thanks! Actually, as far as voice acting goes and as far as adding a new scene goes, I would've done it; But as I stated earlier this flash is a "Music Video", and the "speech" in the end is STILL part of the song, and that's where the songs ends. :P

Thanks for your review!

[He found light]

Not so good.

Definitely needs a lot more work.

First off, there's not really a plot to it at all, which is something rather important for a claymation movie to have. Just kind of a guy walking around and seeing something.

Second, a preloader will always make the animation seem better.

Thirdly, you had two white bars on either side of the animation which were really distracting. Make shur that your dimensions match your video.

The one thing that was done well was that the animation moved smoothly and wasn't choppy.

Keep working on it, though. It looks like you have potential.

Ahart responds:

Okay, thanks for the advice.
I just don't know how to get the preloader to work with the movie.
But thank you for the other tips :]

[Russians again?]

Pretty good.

I liked it, but it could use some work. The voice acting had a lot of static and kind of took away from the effect of the flash. Also, I think you should have completely drawn everything instead of using pictures. Lastly, it seemed like it didn't have an end.

Overall, it was good and it had a good message.

Dew responds:

<3 Much love.