InsertFunnyUserName's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Dark Hour]

Pretty good.

I'm guessing there's going to be a series to follow this. I'm looking forward to it.

A couple problems, though. The first is that The dimensions of your flash didn't match the submission dimensions. This left an annoying white line on the bottom and left hand side. The second is that the music didn't stop with the flash. If you were to replay it, the music would double over and be chaotic.

Other then that it was good. I like the way at the end that the numbers of the clock started shaking. That was cool.

nooblet11 responds:

Fixing that music with the correct codes at a later date.

[Tuntun & Cornolio]

Good, but...

English subtitles please.

Also, you may want to animate their arms and legs while they're talking, so those parts are a little more interesting to watch.

[An Apple a Day..]

Heh, pretty good.

Short, though, that's my only complaint.

[STS - Breathless]

Eh.

A little to literal. It didn't really flow well. It seems like a comical flash put to a serious song.

SoundTheStereo responds:

perhaps by creating such literal images it allows you to think what else there could be hidden within the song...

hmmm...

-STS

[Poor Little Cat]

Lame.

The biggest problem is it's just speech bubbles instead of actual speech, which is pretty tacky.

[.-Target Practice-.]

It was okay.

Kind of a simple little thing. I've a few complains.

First off, it was just a stick figure flash. Next time, you probably want to use actual characters so it doesn't look cheesy.

Second, the speech bubbles were a little lame.

Also, it could have used some music during the flash so it doesn't get boring.

That's all, really, besides just putting more time into the characters and backgrounds.

[Zidane, the Lousy writter]

Ohlol, what?

That was definitely unexpected.

First off, I'm not quite sure what the hell that was. It was completely random.

Second, I'm not quite sure what was up with the voiceover. I'm about 90% sure that was just gibberish and not another language. If it was gibberish, well, a regular voice over would have done the job. If it was another language, than first off, it was very slurred so even if I did know the language, I probable wouldn't be able to understand it and second, English please. Or at least say it's in another language.

Thirdly, it just spontaneously ended without any notification to the viewer that there isn't anything after the long pause of white.

Lastly, the animation of the guy at the beginning of the flash was okay, however, the rest of it was just fast, hard to follow, and poorly tweened (if at all). If you're going to do something like that, at least give the viewer an idea of what is going on.

Arcaniel responds:

You are right, I should kill myself
The basis of this video it's meant to be random.