I noticed some grammercal problems and one spelling mistake, other then that a niceley written story. Although my reaction is fiercly different.
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I am wondering what was the inspiration or influence to write this, or do you fantisize S&M and rape situations well? If so, then Hello, my names Spike. Would you like a drink?
I have a terrific imagination. :3
Wow, you are a good story teller. I mean, to even write that? You, my friend, have a beutiful imagianation. (I'm pretty sure i spelt that wrong)
Thanks. :3
Wow, you were telling the truth on MSN.
That was hot.
Would I lie to you?
I decided I'd lube her up for what was coming next, and brought her up to my mouth and started licking her hairless little twat. She seemed to want to make the most of a bad situation (for her) and spread her legs to give me better access to her sex.
It was still fascinating to me just HOW good they tasted. Their skin was sweet, with just a touch of saltiness. Their wings and hair almost like spun sugar. And their pussies... Ah! Fantastically sweet! Pure honey, with some other flavor that I just couldn't place. There just wasn't any way to quantify it! Call it 'essence of female' And the meat, you ask? Well that's the odd thing. Each one I'd eaten last time had a different flavor. The first one tasted very sweet, like candied meat. The second one like macadamia nuts, and the final one I ate was very much like tuna sushi. I was dieing to find out what they taste like cooked.
Little blondie was soon gushing honey as my tongue brought her to a twitching, squirming orgasm. I kept licking for a little while longer, but she seemed to be done. I reached down with my free hand, picked up one of the skewers and lined it up with her now slick opening.
Slowly I inserted it into the entrance of her vagina, twisting it as I went. At first there was no resistance, then I came to the end of her passage. I held her more firmly, as I pushed past the internal barrier. Her little fists beat uselessly on my thumb, and her slender legs kicked wildly as the pain exploded through her tiny frame, and the miniature spit ripped through her insides. Soon enough she looked like she went into shock or something. I was trying to be careful, but I could see that she wasn't even going to last long enough to see her writhe in the heat of the fire.
The end of the skewer finally emerged from her mouth and I released her now-limp body. I used a bit of twine I'd dug out of the bottom of my pack to tie her limbs to the stick (to keep them from dangling into the flame), and put her aside to work on the next one.
Her eyes were wide and she was panting harshly in the heat. She tried to move her arms and legs, but all she managed was some twitches. So far, she was managing to keep her head up off the surface of the hot pan on her own, which was a good thing. I'd thought I might need to use something to keep it from contacting with the heated surface. If that happened, she'd die almost at once.
She tried arching her back too, but I wanted her to cook evenly, so I placed a finger on her belly and pressed her flat. After only a few seconds, I flipped her over onto her stomach. Now she bowed her body, trying to keep her sensitive breasts and pussy away from the mercilessly hot metal. I couldn't have that, so I pressed her down with three fingers this time. One between the remains of her wings, one on her seared ass-cheeks and finally one in the middle to prevent her from any movement at all.
This makes me happy in the pants.
lol
Impressive.
Fivened the flash.
Yaaay. :D
Has sex?
You must really love Barbed wire, huh?
Cool, cool...
Iteresting. HOW ABOUT THAT NUCLEAR FUSION?!!?!
It's fabulous.
Your story writing is just amazing, i'll be reading and commenting on every one of them from now on. You are one of the finest people on this site. Do you reckon you and I can be mates?
^__^
what the fuck!!! you spelled clothes wrong.... it makes me cringe
I hate editing. :I
hav a happy 2008 hope ya do well
Thanks. :3
Well at least in Detroit they kill you b4 rapeing you.
Us Yankees are straaaaaaaaange ones.
Well isn't that just a charming tale of love, lust, greed, deception, revenge, and justified raping.
Makes me fear for your sanity.
Sanity is for squares.
Jesus christ that was scary,but it had awesome detail.
Very nice story. = )
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