InsertFunnyUserName's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic the Unstoppable]

Good.

I'm not a big fan of sprite movies, but other than that, I don't have any complains. The animation was smooth and the voice acting was well done.

[Heroes - Lost valley :: 2]

Eh, could be better.

Not bad, but not great. A few things set me off:

First, you could have used some voice acting in the first scene. The speech bubbles were a tad amateurish and took away from the seriousness of the flash.

Secondly, it ended abruptly. He gave that speech and then it just ended. It made it seem more like a public service announcement than a serious flash. I think another scene would have been good to put in there, rapping everything up.

The backgrounds were pretty good, but the animation of the characters' walking sequences and the moving of the arm in the second seen could be improved on. Make the walking a little more subtle as to not make it appear that the character is marching through some sort of knee high mud. Less is more.

And, when the man was moving his arm during the speech, it looked like the arm was three separate pieces and had two elbows. Make the shoulder joint a little higher and make sure that when you're tweening the arm, that everything stays together and doesn't create gaps or breaks.

Overall it was an okay flash. With some improvement, it could be pretty good. Keep working on it.

Blaze responds:

Thanks! Actually, as far as voice acting goes and as far as adding a new scene goes, I would've done it; But as I stated earlier this flash is a "Music Video", and the "speech" in the end is STILL part of the song, and that's where the songs ends. :P

Thanks for your review!

[He found light]

Not so good.

Definitely needs a lot more work.

First off, there's not really a plot to it at all, which is something rather important for a claymation movie to have. Just kind of a guy walking around and seeing something.

Second, a preloader will always make the animation seem better.

Thirdly, you had two white bars on either side of the animation which were really distracting. Make shur that your dimensions match your video.

The one thing that was done well was that the animation moved smoothly and wasn't choppy.

Keep working on it, though. It looks like you have potential.

Ahart responds:

Okay, thanks for the advice.
I just don't know how to get the preloader to work with the movie.
But thank you for the other tips :]

[Bad Baby]

Fucking A+, my good man.

I haven't seen anything that outstandingly awesome in a long time. :D

[Closure]

Pretty good.

Not amazing, but definitely good. It had a sort of eerie feel to it that you pulled off well.

I liked the drawing scene. I think you did the pencil strokes really well.

[Till death do us part]

Very much excellently well done.

Disturbing, but very well done and very moving. People tend to shy away from these kinds of things, but it happens and no amount of hiding will change that.

Excellent job.

[Russians again?]

Pretty good.

I liked it, but it could use some work. The voice acting had a lot of static and kind of took away from the effect of the flash. Also, I think you should have completely drawn everything instead of using pictures. Lastly, it seemed like it didn't have an end.

Overall, it was good and it had a good message.

Dew responds:

<3 Much love.

[Présentation de La France]

Pretty good.

I liked it, but it seemed to have that kind of slide show effect at parts. The little characters was good, I though, though. I don't think that part needed anything more than it had.

Good for a school project. Pretty funny.

Hashnoerej responds:

I see, the slide show thing is interesting. Had not looked at it that way, but I get what you're trying to say. Good point, helps me out somehow.

Thanks.

[The Truth About Doom-Fan!]

Aha, nice.

I forgot about that little salesman. :D

Billy-Bean responds:

Yeh lmao.

[Ekkosangen]

Oh my God.

This is the best flash ever.

You, sir, win the internet. :D