It's definitely a very addictive game. It has that challenging aspect to it that makes you want to come back and play just to spite the game. In other words, fun.

Pretty good graphics, which is a plus.

However, it's rather annoying to have to go back to the main menu and enter a password every time you die on a level. It would have been much better were you to have just made it so that you automatically respawned at the beginning of the level.

I also agree with another reviewer who mentioned that this could have been improved if it was mouse controlled as opposed to arrow controlled. The physics and the movement of the marble are just too hard to control with the arrow keys at times.

But, nonetheless, fun.

I like the overall plot and I think that the storyline flowed well. I think it was a good decision to not go farther than when he stepped inside the time machine because otherwise, it would have had a cliche feeling that would have taken away from it.

I like the colorful linework of the characters. It was a unique touch.

The only thing I feel takes points away is that though I liked the music and I think that the music really fit what was happening, there was no transition between the individual music pieces which made it a bit awkward to listen to, particularly being that there was no dialog. I think that fading the clips in and out would add to this.

4/5

Well, your animation is smooth, so you get points for that.

It leaves a lot to be desired, though.

First is, add a preloader. Always add a preloader. If you don't know how to make one yourself, there's a whole bunch of them here on ng for you to use if you click the 'downloads' link under the header. There's also a number of preloader tutorials in the flash tutorials section.

Second, add sound. Sound makes everything more interesting. If you don't have it, your flash will seem a hell of a lot more boring than if you had sound.

Third, it was extremely short. Too short. Spend a while adding on parts to your flash, though I know the longing to submit your first flash. I did the same thing with my first submission.

There's potential here, though. Keep working on it.

2/5

(You're going to get a higher score on this today than you would any other day of the year because it's clock day. Most people won't even watch your flash. Bad day to submit it if you want feedback and a fair score.)

I can't believe I missed this. >:(

It got kind of repetitive in the middle there. Also, at certain points, the drums overpowered the rest of the song and should have been quieter.

It was pretty good aside from that.

My only complaint is that I think that after the "prepare for launch" part, you should have gone back into a heavy rhythm.